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Where the Line is Drawn // FIRST DRAFT

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Summary

A dying alien finds comfort in Bobbi, a human struggling to untangle her feelings from her ethical and moral responsibilities.

Genre
Scifi,Drama
Author
Tate
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Author's Note

This is a first draft, so it's rough around the edges. Constructive criticism is much appreciated!

If the story or characters interest you, you can find out more about them on instagram: @bobbi.and.sonja.

Thank you so much for reading and especially for dropping a comment or two; they really help!

-Tate

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1. Author's Note
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