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Satisfied

"Was very happy to find a fanfic with kagome and sesshomaru as a couple... I loved their interaction till halfway through the story which was more true to my preference... Was a little put out by kagome's character since she was completely different but was greatly satisfied that it stayed true to sesshomaru's cold character (except for the romantic times since we don't really know from anime how he is with romance)... Also was a little rattled when Kagome considered shippo her son as i had always seen him as her very tiny little cute brother... Loved how you took the anime original characters and put a twist on the modern alpha dominant love story kinds.. As far as grammar is concerned i think it could be improved considerably but all in all i really enjoyed it and hadn't expected it to cause I'm always picky with my fanfics.. But this was a great creation.. Hope this reaches more inuyasha fans... "

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"This story brings back the Nostalgia of When I was reading the Old Inuyasha, it was quite amazing, the story, brings back the feeling of the characters, and It seems like the real deal, but I realize, It a Fanfic, lol, anyway its really good. Keep it up"

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"I enjoyed your story but I was a lil sadden at the lack of lemony goodness. It would have given the story that oomph but not to worry, the lack thereof didn't detract much from the story. It was just my preference. All in all, do Keep up the good plots and I applaud the original characters! They're Unique. "

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"I loved your story. quite a poetic summary you have going on over there. I loved the plot, the character interactions and everything else. good work and keep on writing. best of luck and i'll keep reading your stories."

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