What is your opinion?
Out of this world
"I throughly enjoyed reading this story, it took me to places inside my head, places I rarely visit. When I read a book, I tend to drift into what is portrayed. As a Marine, I often stick to military fiction and non-fiction, but I wanted to venture out and expand my writing. This is exactly what I needed. As I read the detailed portrayals, I quickly imagined what the writer was displaying while also added my own personal twist. Well done, I’ll be following you for future content!"
Tris in Wonderland
" As usual this review only refers to the first chapter but ...Wow! You certainly are a talented writer. I’m impressed and a little jealous actually. Your grammar is spot on. Your descriptions are excellent. While reading I found it easy to imagine myself trapped in Tris’s mind with her. A place full of all kinds of possible wonders and terrors. And yet it is a place that Tris does not wish to leave. How sad and horrifying for her. This makes me wonder if Tris suffers from some form of autism. I suppose I’ll have to keep on reading to find out, but I am very impressed so far. Please keep writing. You obviously know what you’re doing. "
