What is your opinion?
Mysterious and intriguing
"The author, in the first chapter already gets you hooked. It confuses yet intrigues you further. What is the character going to do next, who is this character, how is she important etc. There are a few grammatical errors that I feel the author will end up fixing as time goes. Nothing major. Also the authors style of writing is fantastic. Truly. The plot in itself is good. Eases you into more questions than anything else, also intrigues you to want to know more. Overall, I feel this book is amazing and has the potential to go far."
Good so far
"I like the plot and the idea. The way you started it had me confused and intrigued at the same time but i think that’s what you we’re going for . So it’s actually really good and i love how you’re very descriptive in your writing, it really creates a picture and mood for the story and scene. You have few grammatical errors which can always be fixed but overall i really liked this book. You’re doing good !"
An interesting start!
"I must say, it was an interesting start, hooked me right in the story! I would definitely read more of it. However, there are too many grammar mistakes that puts the reader off. A lot of polishing needs to be done. The story has a LOT of potential, and this is just the first draft I think. Some scenes need to have a bit more detail. I hope this helps and you keep this in mind when you edit it :) If you need a much more detailed review then let me know. I've judged and reviewed many books on Wattpad, so I know a thing or two :)"
