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The Twins

"Pretty good story. It has potential. However, some of it needs to be tweaked. The paragraphs look choppy in some spots."

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Good to know about lovare's

"What is your next book😸"

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Good

"Great book"

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The twins

"Very accommodating and pure story telling."

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Nice

"Tnx for an extra story."

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The twins

"Interesting to hear the start of the twins. An how they all intertwine with C armen etc"

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