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"I like the way the plot is smooth and it’s not broken up "

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"Well, it's a sexy story bordering on erotica (I have read stronger things) and i think it is nice to read the romance before having a sex scene. i don't like stories where the two main characters have a random fight and make it an excuse to suddenly have hot hard sex. it is ridiculous. that's why i liked how you progressed before reaching that phase. good work. i loved it."

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