What is your opinion?
Pretty Good!
"First off, I'm a huge fan of Big Hero 6. This was a very good story and plot overall. The overall writing style is great. I like the way that you portrayed Tadashi in the story. I wish that he could have been in the movie a little more. Your work is pretty neat. Well done. I enjoyed the way you included Bamax and how Tadashi built him. That was a nice touch. Overall, good job!"
Solid four
"Firstly, good story. It has a nice storyline and the writing is fluid. I like Tadashi, his character feel believable and corresponds with the little we see of him in the movie, nice job. But since this review is supposed to help you and the story get better, I´m gonna be a downer and focus on the things that need work rather than the good things. Your technical skills are good but not perfect. There are a bunch of sentences and words that just dont fit. My advise is to read it outloud to yourself, it makes it alot easier to spot things like that. It also helps with getting a sense of the flow in the story. Dialogue is nice, but I feel like there needs to be more of it. Remember that it is a good was of relaying information so you dont have to use inner monologue all the time. Maybe Tadashi talks to GoGo or Honey about his problems with Sam? Or Wasabi maybe? (I dont feel like he would ask Fred). That way we get a sense of what the others are thinking about the whole thing. Speaking of, we dont really get a sense of what the others feel about Tadashi´s problems with San, which is something I feel like they should notice. The story would do well with more perspectives. When it comes to characters I feel like you´ve nailed the characters in the film. I would like to see more Hiro, but thats mainly because I just love that snarky little brat. (I cant wait to see what he says to San. Probs something along the lines of "So you´re the one who´s been an asshole to my big brother huh?"). When it comes to San though I feel like her character is mainly unexplained. Judging from her cryptic remarks, she has some kind of dramatic backstory that will be revealed later, in which case its good. But her coldness just seems very strange to someone who doesnt know her backstory and its getting really, really difficult to like her. Try to add something to make her more likable before you accidentally destroy her character by making her seem like a complete jerk, something that I imagine might damage the story somewhat. You´re good right now, but it is becoming an imminent threat. Well, thats all I had for now. Great story, I love Big Hero 6. Keep it up! Ill keep on reading and reviewing."
