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Great exploration of Max's mind

"This is actually my first Life is Strange fanfic and I am happy about it :) Although I do believe in the other ending (don't get me wrong I LOVE Chloe, but the other ending would make the story much better), I like how you described how messed up Max's mind was and I could simply feel how tired they were. I also like how you write Max's alternate mind talking to her. It feels real that she would be having that side effect after all of that. Aren't you going to continue this? I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter :) I know this review might not help to get you better, but anyway, good job! Regards, Kei Angelus"

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