What is your opinion?
Cool Teen Fic
"Honestly, I love everything about the story. The concept like every high school series but with a cool fantasy twist. For grammar and punctuation that something you can easily fix. Just take your time to edit. Read more novels and look at the author's writing style. It's helps widen your vocabulary, which I find is on point. Each word is use in the right context so it's great. Plus your story characters are pretty much awesome. I love it! Look forward to reading more, thanks u for the review. I was surprised. thanks u."
Aine
"This book and the characters are really cool, I enjoyed reading it, but there are a few grammatical and punctuation errors. Plus it would be cooler if some of the things and people were described for better understanding. Good job tho,i think the book is great."
Creative and filled with surprises
"I am looking forward to reading more of this, I like the creativity of this novel but you have to add more work in your writing style and vocabulary. Try reading more novels and picking helpful points from every novel you come across. But all the same, this novel is a work of creativity and I would love to read more work like this one."
Good premise. There’s more telling than showing
"The story seems to have a lot of promise. There’s too much exposition in the first chapter and a few grammatical errors. I can’t understand each character if their actions and behaviours are constantly being explained by the protagonist because she isn’t a reliable narrator and it’s a lot of info to take in. The protagonist doesn’t always have to explain a persons behaviour. And try and show that she’s a nerd rather than telling the readers. Eg she’s thinking about a new manga chapter at lunch. The plot seems really interesting (I’m a sucker for cliche romance novels) and I’m sure it will become better as you go on. Keep it up "
Keep it up ^_^
"My dear, I like your story, you seem to have so many ideas. You just need to check the spelling and punctuation along with using formal language, therefore, I suggest you read more. Best of luck, Akuma by Angel"
Aine
"I based the rating on the first chapter alone, but since it's only the intro I can only know so far so I will change it, if the plot get better I mean. "
