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Love it

"I love the story. It's beautiful and intriguing. The characters good ones. The plot good also. Spelling needs a little work but everything else is great."

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A mermaids Heart

"Excellent book 2 !! So SAD 😢 though! I wish there was a solution to make all of the characters happy 😊 !! Great writing too ❤️ and ✝️🛐 s "

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I'm crying

"I was so happy when I found the second book was posted after I read the first one. This book will take you on a Rollercoaster of emotions, and you will find yourself mad at the main character constabrly, but you'll also find yourself routing for her. The main character will go through so much pain, and you may find yourself crying right along side her. There are conditions to everything, and she has to make a heartwrenching choice that no one will be satisfied with. This book is a fitting end to this series, and I was not ready for it to end. I want to know what happens after, even after what tbe author told us. This book an unedited version, with no new paragraphs and a few grammatical/spelling errors. The romance between Neptune seemed a little rushed, just a few more scenes with him in the beginning I feel would allow the relationship to seem more grown out and heartbreaking. "

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Love it

"Love this sequel "

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A Pirate's Song

"Very well written, the plot kept me captured. I couldn't put it down. I felt as if I was in the book with the characters. No details were left behind, the writing was clear and precise. I have recommended this book to friends and I'm sure they will too. Job well done! "

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It is getting better and better!

"Loved it again! I love the third book the most (read on dream and not finished yet) but the second book makes the turn around and for me the third book explains all the pain of this book. I juts feel the author is growing with each book as well as the story and the characters! "

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A mermaids heart

"I loved the story but I wished Neptune would break his soul in half to give to caleb and evangeline so they all could be together. I mourned the loss of Neptune from evangeline and I wished she could keep him too. But that is life and we cant have it both ways. "

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Good story

"Grammar at times is off but it doesn't really bother me. The story is so good."

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Liked it

"So I'm now halfway. I think I preferred the first story better, because where I'm at now, I'm starting to lose interest. Maybe it's because the second part is longer, I'm not really sure. I still love the characters, so that's not it :) But it takes quite a long time - which considering what she has to do, is required ofcourse. But yeah, it kind of ruins the flow I felt while reading the first one. You're writing is still lovely!"

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