Interesting Read

"The story caught my attention right away. The writing style was very modern and really felt as though the narrator's voice was loud and clear in the mind of the reader. There were a few grammatical errors and the plot was a bit difficult to follow at times, but the overall premise of the story was very eye catching and interesting. I would really like to see a bit more detail added to the scenes if possible. With a bit of editing and attention to detail, I feel as though this book would be worth 5 stars and I would be more than willing to continue reading it in the future! Loved the idea and very happy that I took the time to read it. It was very good for a first time writer."