What is your opinion?
Book 1 Innocent Heart
"What an utterly ridiculously wonderful story! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"
love it
"Me being the person i am, i accidentally started reading chapter 15 before starting chapter one, but after reading the first paragraph i was hooked. everything is amazing and i love it. there were parts i felt could have had more, but i really cant complain about how the story is. once i started reading i couldn't put it down. i can't wait to read the next book!!!"
Emotional and Full of Imagery
"I love the way that this story takes the reader on a ride with their emotions. Ash/ Ashlyn is very relatable and it is wonderful to see her as she grows from page one until the end of the novel. I love how the story itself takes place in a futuristic timeline, adding more touches of sci-fi to this already emotional tale. The prologue especially does a great job setting the scene for the protagonist and the rest of the novel with mind blowing imagery and great song writing showing that the author is great at giving the reader a world that they can totally immerse themselves in. Great job!"
Innocent Heart
"A wonderful start to what I think is and can be a beautiful story Ben. Keep the faith and focus on what you want the readers to feel. It will all fall into place as each chapter unfolds. Most importantly, keep reviewing and make edits when you can see your own errors :) Raven"
Emotionally charged
"I read the prologue and was almost in tears. I have an infant baby sister, so it really hit me hard. I thought it was well done, with an intriguing plot and interesting characters. However, I think that you need to go over this again because there were a lot of grammatical errors and places where you switched tenses. It distracted from what could have been a really great story. However, even with those errors there, I think this story has real potential. Keep writing!"
