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One of Us Must Now Die

"An exciting excerpt from Loss of Innocence, this short piece kept me trembling with nervous anticipation of the outcome. Love at its most poignant. A man willing to lay down his own life and die a painful and terrifying death for the woman he loves! He would give her a chance to live, whatever the cost to himself!"

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Interesting

"A short yet interesting story. Quite different where human and beast clash and they know one must live an die. It's simple and easy to understand. The story structure is good as well! Very well done!"

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One Of Us Must Now Die

"This one was interesting. It became more so, when I realized they’d met only the day before. Love at first sight? Sex cures whatever ails you? A perspective I’ve never considered."

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