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Awesome
"Wow, what an awesome story. Way too lead into the next phase of the storyline. Would love to read more like this. Way to go!"
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Thumbs up
"Awesome story"
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Okay thanks for the update
"I just need to get the shower and then I can get the rest of the stuff I want you too and I’ll be there for a few minutes to see if I need anything from you or what I need you do I love love you bye bye love love you miss you bye love you love miss you miss miss love miss y’all bye love love you bye love you miss love you 😍 miss love ❤️ miss y’all bye love love ❤️ miss miss y’all bye love love 💕 "
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Body Combat
"Twisted and Hilarious as f@*#! This is smut and it gets better with vengeance! Total suprise, it turned me on and made me laugh."
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Good
"Liking it good job."
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Body combat
"Hottest story I have ever read, too technical of descriptions though, and too many exclamation marks."
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Down and out
"Absolutely brilliant, full of the most lurid imaginings of a very clever though mischievous writer. Devious ending that .eat the reader wanting. Worthy of an award for best salacious story of the year."
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WOW!!
"Excellent!! I loved every bit of it. The forced, the not so forced, and the happy ending."
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Body Combat
"Lov3d this story. He got what he deserved and they had a great time...."
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Omg
"Wow like wow nothen like the ultimate revenge to that dick and at the end I was laughing cause the girls took that and went home together I loved it "
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You just have to love trick or treat
"Just loved how the tables were turned "
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Wowzers
"Trying to find words...just wow! IlA veryy interesting read. Good job!"
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❤️❤️❤️
"All I can say is wow!!😂"
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Body combat part 1
"Need more interaction/words between the sex partners. But is food as is."
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Officially Spent
"I have never heard or seen the words used to describe the body parts or functions of intercourse....ever! Impressive!"
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Body combat part one
"Just wonder if this kind of sex is really happening 🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀. If it is(?) then I missed a lot."
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🥵 Very hot
"I really like the unfolding of events as they were very surprising from the start. Fantasy + slightly Bdsm were through fully enjoyable. Very hot. Especially the 1st chapter. However the never ending clinical terms felt like a doctor or a biology teacher narrating the scenes which was really a killer and getting us out of the flow of the story. I loved the “forcing but not really theme” until the clearly not consensual act with Kat at 1st (her repeating stop and no) and the women in the last chapter going waaaay over board with him. It was not arousing anymore but seemed like plainly painful and excruciating! Very cringy. "
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Body Combat - Review
"Hey, I wanted to say that this was really interesting! Definitely some pretty good writing. I had to stop halfway through chapter 2 though because the exclamation marks were so aggravating to me. I think I'll come back later, but for now please know that I think your writing is amazing, and punctuation is not-so-amazing. (And hopefully that wasn't too harsh :) ) Edit: I have finished the book and the last scene was my favorite :) The exclamations marks are still very annoying, but I glossed over them cuz I liked the actual scene."
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Body Combat
"Very detailed BDSM as it is real"
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A Little Dark
"The writing was really good. No grammar or punctuation issues I can recall. The story line was good, as in, well thought out and well written. The story was a little on the dark side. Definately had some questionable issues regarding consensual and non-consensual sex. The first chapter ws dedicated to non-consesual turned consensual sex, read it to understand my meaning. Chapter two going from consensual to non-consensual which pretty much involved anal rape. The last chapter is about revenge and has some light torture. Some may feel this justified, others my not. Very descriptive lesbian intercourse. Again, it was still well written. Happy Reading Y'all R"
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