Mary Peterson

Enjoyable

Oh this was adult goodness! There a few grammar mistakes but overall this was delicious! You write with a pace that is easy to follow. Good good stuff!

Slow Going

I am having a hard time staying with this one. So much of this is about Kieran and Adrienne. Too many details of how she takes a shower and gets dressed. This book consists of a lot of details, but not much substance to keep me intrigued. I can say it was nice to hear a real black voice in the narrative. I can relate to the tone and candor! Great job in that regard.

Submission

This was submission on many levels. Submission to the will of God, to man and then to the truth. I saw in this a reversal of the children of Israel in Goshen against Egypt. This us truly a new take on erotica and I never thought it could be meshed with Christian values. Intriguing!

New

In all my readings, there has never been a more open ans honest showing of a Godly belief in Jesus. You wove that story like the finest tapestry and allowed the love of God to interlock the love of humanity that He wants inside all of us. His redemptive plan is forever for anyone and I am glad to have received it myself. It would have been good to hear more of Wyatt's backstory and how he changed his mind. That was only thing I wanted to know more of.

Wow

What a roller coaster! The twists and turns really worked for this premise. I hope there is a continuation for this story!!

Officially Spent

I have never heard or seen the words used to describe the body parts or functions of intercourse....ever! Impressive!

The Determined Mr. Delicious

At first I thought this went a little too fast into the story, but I was riveted by what Giovanni and his brothers were going to do next! I really enjoyed the fast pace, clever banter and sexy scenes. I am definitely reading the next installment. Thank you for the entertaining read!

Wildfire

I appreciate the authentic feelings displayed in the characters of this story. I really enjoyed the backstory of Malar and the realness of the love of money that can lead to destruction of self. Despite some grammatical errors, the purpose of the story was never lost. The intricate way of sharing the gospel was beautiful! Well done!

The Ex Wife

I would have given this a higher rating, but the story was so disjointed in the plot. I appreciate a good, quick story when you are just starting out, but this had major plot lines that didn't get their just do. I'm hoping this was just a one off. I will give your other books a chance.

Cupids Queue

This moved at a faster pace. So enjoyable. Witty and intelligent. I could not stop reading this. Loveable characters, deep friendships and good storyline. Love the international gumbo you create in your books!

The Heart of Moss

This story was light and refreshing. I appreciate you keeping Mikayla strong throughout the story. Knowing and showing her worth. I also appreciate the love and romance displayed between her and Damien. Very entertaining. 👏

My Best Friends Brother

This story, just as its predecessors have been beyond satisfying! Every character is shaped in fullness so that the reader not only knows their story, but also fills it. Amazing triumph to your ability, skill and heart for what you are doing!!! 👏👏👏

My Future Stepbrother

Despite many misspelled words, the story never lost its plot. This story dealt with real life issues and emotions that you don't see in most teen themed books. Your characters draw you in to their narrative. You make the reader emotionally invested. Their joy, pain and grief become real. I will definitely continue with this saga, for you have started something that hard to stop!!! Job well done! 👏 👏😉😄👏👏

More to Love

Outstanding!!!!!! I had to remind myself that these were teenagers and not adults. The subject matter was so on point for today. You told a story that was simply Amazing!!!! Bravo!!!👏👏

The Billionaires Revenge

I was drawn in by the 1st book and you entangled me with this one. The characters, the wit, the emotion, and the drama is everything! In spight of some misspelling and grammer issues, you truly take a reader on a satisfying ride!!! Thank you!🧡🧡

Her Gift

This was all good! The writing style, plot, everything was perfect! This story was truly a treat! The main characters Hayden (love the name) and Rae were endearing. This book was a great find!

The Rise of Raven

Raven truly rose in this book. The plot wasn't as riveting as Double Reflection. As always there was plenty of humor and sex. Genevieve and Damien are my favs! So glad they were brought back in this story. Thanks again for a good ride!

Double Reflection

I'm so glad I started at the beginning of this trilogy! I loved this conclusion of the first and definitely love your writing style. Your characters are so endearing and funny. Your content is so provocative and fulfilling; it meets all my reading needs! 😉

Angel's Sillouette

All things Aiden and Genie! This book was so delicious in its depictions and descriptions. You're writing style is easy to follow. Pulling us in with tantalizing word pics. Aiden is so diabolical, I wanted to know when his obsession really started. So glad I came across your 3rd book in this series, which made me start at the beginning! Mmmm Mmmm Good! 😋

The Devil's Looking Glass

It's been a while since I've enjoyed a read this much! This story is funny, passionate, and satisfying! I have added the next two installments for my reading pleasure! Thank for adding your offerings to this app. Much appreciated!

Well We'll Well

Outside of a few spelling and grammar issues, this story is so cute! Firstly, Luke and Leah.....love the Star Wars nod 😉 Grayson.....Italian.....hot! KY and Beck....fun. I enjoy the pace of the storyline and the quick wit of the characters. I will definitely stick with this to end! Thank you for sharing your gift!

Sweet Love

I loved everything about this story! A love based on true friendship is the best kind. The parental love demonstrated was so genuine and true. This was a refreshing read, full of fun and wit! I look forward to reading another of your offerings.

Today

Good book. Cute characters. Introvert perspective well described. The emotional and verbal abuse of Sasha and its treatment could have been addressed a little more due to her suicidal tendencies that was brought out. Your writing style is easy and enjoyable. Keep going.

Interesting

Ar first I thought I would not continue to read this story since it seemed to climax too early for me. Then I pushed through because I wanted to see how this played out and I must admit, despite the many character introductions, the story held an appeal.
The dynamic between Selene and Allerick was a little disconnected for me. He always seemed to be behind in the scheme of things, especially being an alpha and a king.
I am hoping the sequel is not weighed down with an abundance of characters added to the mix.
For your 1st attempt at this genre, you are off to a good start!

Satisfied

I really enjoyed this book. I really appreciated the fact that your female was strong in character even through personal abuse and hardship. The love between the main characters was woven into the story seamlessly, without being overdramatized. I like your writing style and there weren't any grammar problems that I recall. Great job!

Interesting

I must say the detailed descriptions that you give the sex scenes are Everything!!!! In spite of your Grammer issues, the books reads smoothly with a nice continuous flow I enjoy. I truly appreciate that Victoria was well accomplished with a career and not the run of the mill college graduate or assistant. I also appreciate that she is written with that black woman sass and fire. You also celebrate her natural beauty which is refreshing. Thank you for sharing this story with readers!

Good read

A few missed words here ans there. I not stop reading. It passionate and pleasurable. I like your flow and love it when writers continue chapters into the next. This one is worth a re-read!

Unexpected

This plot was so unexpected! You managed to make this erotica into so much more. There was poetry, intrigue, mystery, and a deep sense of liberation woven within this story. I did not expect to be pulled in so deeply, but you made the characters deep; it was more than descriptive sex, there was true emotional impact. This was great find and I'm glad I found it.

Well Done

Thank you so much for continuing this saga. I did notice that there were many spelling errors in this book compared to previous. The plot remains interesting and the characters are intriguing without overdoing it. I'm looking forward to reading the next book.

Heartbreak

I'm lost for words!!!!!! Will there be no follow-up on Inkitt? Oh my goodness!!!! Left on a cliff hangover with no ending.....so wrong!
You are a great writer and I have enjoyed getting to know these characters. This has been one of the most enjoyable mafia reads on this app. 🙂
PLEASE add a book three to this series!!!! 🙏

Satisfaction

I could not put this down. You hit the ground running and never let off the gas! Asimina is a b**** who takes nothing off no one. I am so proud of how she rebounds from every thing that tries to destroy her. She is a fighter and a survivor!
Petro and her family are solid as a rock. That is what family should be. Even though I hated this last chapter, I know they will redeem themselves.
Raphaele is the best Godfather of the Italian mafia I have so far in all of the books I have read!
I love his Capos and their unfaltering brotherhood.
Thank you for rendering this smartly written, adrenaline causing, emotional and funny novel.
I am here for Book 2.

Delicious

I have enjoyed your previous book, but this one outshines that! Your writing style is so fluid and I love how you continue the scenes from chapter to chapter. These characters are so funny. I giggle so much from their banter. I also love that the women in your books are self-made, determined and strong with no apologies! This is a hit!!!

Delicious

Fun! I laughed a lot during this book. It was entertaining and heartfelt. Missy is a trip! Brandon was man any girl would want. I read this quicker than expected. Enjoyed it. Work on your grammar and spelling. Keep up the good work.

Revealed

I half thought the ending was unfair until Axel showed up. You really had me on edge. I enjoyed this trilogy and encourage you to keep writing.

Yes

Just as good as the first book. Unconventional love story indeed. I'm a little put off at how many times the leading lady is stomped in the face or beat in the face. A little overexcessive to me. On another note, your granmer and name consistency has improved since the previous book. I even keep up when you use your language for the character names instead if English. On to book 3!

Deep

Given that English is not your first language, this book is good. You have shown the depths of undercover work that is eye-opening, even though this is fiction. The characters are intriguing and I will be finishing this whole series, especially because I am all for strong female lead characters!

Eye Popping

I have no words.......you pint such a vivid picture!! It is senses overload!! I am here for it all. Delicious!!
Your writing style and speed of the story is on point. I was never board and I appreciate the back story you gave for each main character. Great job.

Strong

String in character, plot, thought, and overall writing. Titanic us the epitome of strength and the resilience of women who endure unimaginable attacks in every level yet come through victorious and stronger! What a great storyline!

A First

I read Simone's Conquest first and never thought that you would write a second book from Zachary's point of view. How refreshing and intriguing. I thoroughly enjoyed this offering even more. Your grammar has improved greatly and your use of pronouns for your characters have improved as well. I like the flow of your books. I will read your next offering for sure!

2nd time around

I began this book months ago; stopped reading it after the second chapter because it seemed that it started in the middle. I came back to it because I like strong female leads in books. Although the grammer needs a lot if work, it kept my interest to see it to the end. It seems as if English is not your 1st language, but you manage to get your points across. There were paragraphs that repeated themselves and many times you used the incorrect pronoun for the speaker. Take time to proof your work and I am sure you will get 5 stars in your next installments.

Perfect Ending

Once again you've done it. You always manage to bring your characters full circle. I so enjoy your stories and the underlying thread of family love that bases your storyline. I definitely will be continuing with your next installment.

Thoroughly Satisfied

You truly know how to arch a story and keep the momentum going. I have thoroughly enjoyed your story lines and all of the characters. They were not over the top and your stories hold substance. I'm so glad I came across your books.

Love and loss

This was a great follow-up to the first. This was a good surprise and an interesting back story to Nicole. I laughed and cried and I am glad you took this lane to get us back to the 1st book. Ready for the next adventure!

More than expected

The cover through me off! I had a whole other plot in mind, but I was pleasantly surprised! Grateful to see through the inhumane treatment of people of color then, there was individual love that was not denied or dismissed. Thank you.

Sweet Mercy

I am so invested in this story. I have read many wolf stories, but this one is one of my favorite! There is an ease to your writing style and it makes the reader want more. I am looking forwardvto your next updates.

Cat and Mouse

This was non stop action. I loved it. You truly have a way with storytelling. I love a story that is female forward and in control! All of the characters are well written. A true page turner! I will be reading your next book!

I like

The action, the violence, the drama, the sex all adds up to a delicious combination! I like your writing style.....POV makes it easier to keep up. This book checked all the boxes for me. Keep up the great work!

Mature

I really like the flow of this book. It has a maturity that is refreshing. Although you kind of lose me with your choice of words and omission of words, I was still able to get the gist of what you were trying to convey. It's also very nice to see an lead female character who is of African decent. An accomplished, articulate, business savvy and beautiful woman with control over her life!! Codus to you!

Done Deal

I loved that your books deal with adults with adult issues. Again, you show wit, intelligence surprise, sexiness and heart in your characters. May only dislike was the fact that her father was an FBI agent and never thought to keep up with the vicious animal that attacked his daughter. It was too easy for him to track her down and harm her again. Her spiral into postpartum depression was a bit too extreme and quick with no one aware, especially given her mental stability past. Overall, this was another read that I could not put down until the end!

Lasting Love

This is an illustration of love standing the test of time. I devoted your writing style snd the ease of following your story. I look forward to taking another journey through your eyes.

Beyond the Mask

Deep! So much tragedy for so young. I appreciate the rawness, grit and transparency you show through your characters. The multifacets of life that real people experience makes this read even more engrossing. I look forward to your next chapters. Well done!

Invested

I originally thought this was going to nothing but erotica, but I am happily surprised that you gave these characters some depth. I will definitely keep reading as you update.

Liberating

This sequel lived up to its name and I am glad! 🙂
The strength of Ryan's love is the driving current to set Izabel free and it touches the heart. True unconditional love is priceless ❤

Sweet

A light read, with endearing characters. Bittersweet ending, but glad to see a sequel. Looking forward to the next chapter of their lives.

Satisfaction

Fulfilling story from beginning to end!

Yes!!!!!

Here for all of this!!!

Good One

Of all of the stories I have read on this app, this one is just a Good Read! It's witty, funny, and quick paced without leaving me feeling like I don't know these characters. It's raw and rich and I look forward to the coming chapters and updates.

I like!

A couple of curve balls in this one. Cassius was all that! Amelia was a good match for him. I really enjoyed this.

Great

Oh what fun!! This was a good one! The tempo, the style, the storyline were all on point!

Finally

Ugh, you are such a tease!!!! After all this time you give us one little short chapter.....keep us wanting!! I see you 🤨😉

Curveball

As with Dear Lucy, your writing style is great. There are hardly, if any grammar errors and the book is just good. A true full circle story. I like that Harper never chased these men....it was all on her terms. No one can truly fault her for following her heart! Team Buce all the way!!

A new age

This was just as thought provoking as your first novel. I really was expecting justice to be served to her abusers. You literally took the bandaid off of physical, emotional and verbal abuse and its affects! Keep going...you gave a bright future doing this!

Healing power of Love

I thoroughly enjoyed this read! It smart and witty. I cannot believe that this is your 1st offering.....you set the bar high for those who follow. No grammar errors that found. Your style easy to follow with a clear point of view. You should be proud of yourself!

Beautiful

Written so well. Revealed truth to an ongoing issue for women. Loved the unconditional love of Axel. Enjoyed all of this read.

Rapid pace

I like the rhythm and pace of your book. The characters are funny and the banter between them is cute. The suspense is building. Can't wait for the next update.

Mmmmmmmm

Whew! What a read! I loved her feisty attitude and rebellion. Zac was just what he was! Delicious!

HOT HOT 🔥 🔥

Wow! Did not anticipate death of Justin. That was such a loss. This was such an emotional story that had me totally invested in these characters. Great writing style with a few misspelled words and definitely some autocorrect issues. So delicious!

Delicious

There were minor typos and a few missing words here and there. Overall, this was a great read. Funny. Smart. Intelligent.
I will continue because to follow you.

Dirty

Mind games at its best! Twisted and tantalizing!

Real Love

Every chapter gets better and better!! Thank you for the update!

Cute

I always enjoy reading stories that include other races and cultures. It makes a more interesting read and the characters more interesting and exciting.

Nice

The beginning had me hesitant to continue because you never addressed the fact of how she became so inebriated that she could not remember and the fact that he took her virginity. Even though you tackled other real issues, those two were just as important. Overall I enjoyed the descriptions and native languages, and the pace of the book.

Confusing Read

Your writing is all out confusing. Over and over you change point of view without noting who is talking. You frequently misuse pronouns when referring to oneself and there are many missing words within sentences. Making the reader figure out the thought. Please take time to read the comments left by many readers who have made similar remarks and attempt to make the necessary revisions to convince your readers to stay supportive.

Dark and Devious

I am intrigued by this male character. Interested to see where this ends up.

Full on adventure

It has taken a week to finish this snd I liked this story do much. Even given the gratuitous violence, the overarching love and devotion between Brylin and Coal was everything. Looking forward to the continuation of this saga!!

Wild One

I almost gave up on this, but I'm glad I didn't. The end was worth the wait for them all!

Whew What A Whirlwind

At first I thought I would not make it to the end given the number of pages to this book, But I enjoyed every page of it! I like your writing style and no matter how many characters were introduced, I was able to keep up with them. It made sense and gave a real connection to the story as people. Love never fails; it is patient, kind, believes all things, hopes all things, keeps no record of wrong; it is God.

Ahhhhhhhh

This book made me smile the whole time! It was definitely a Hallmark read, with a little more adult action. Nice! Real nice!

My kind of story

I liked the pace of this. You need to clarify who is speaking more clearly. It got a little confusing in some chapters. Other than that, you had no grammar or spelling errors that I saw. Very good job.

Omg

I have following these characters from the beginning all I have to say is Damn! So much intrigue! I love it. Please continue to update on this site.

Continue

Surprised by the points of view in this one!
Young, raw, authentic characters makes for an interesting read. I hope you do update this story here. I will follow this 👌

Fulfilled

Witty, cheeky, and downright delicious storyline! Great read! Very few grammatical errors and easy to follow narration. I enjoy these types of books.

Well Done

No matter the obstacles. True love is worth fighting for and waiting for. Well done story! Well written.

All is well that ends well

The beginning was a little sketchy, but I'm glad I stuck with it. This was an enjoyable read.

Delicious!

Wow!! What a great plot! I could not be happier to have found this story. Si genuine, thoughtful, funny and interesting. You made me want a Luke! Lol

Adult Entertainment

Adult situations among adults. Refreshing! I like the vibe and chemistry between these two. Let the story continue please! So good!

Another Good Read

Loved the tempo of this one. I liked that Harper did not know her full potential and that an older Zane brought it out. Good read.

Happily Surprised

Theo and Hannah are too cute. For teenagers they had some deep control or lack of control issues. A second book would be entertaining to say the least, especially as to fi d out more about the brothers.

Awwww

A perfect story. I enjoyed the read.

Hot!!!!!!!!

Italian men are hot! This story is hot! The word pictures are so vivid, it makes my body ache! So so good! Delicious read!

Smart

This has quickly became one of my favorite reads! Smart, sexy, proactive. Can't wait to read the next chapter of this story!

Delicious

This was even better than the first! You truly have a talent to tell a story! I like theses characters very much. Looking forward to the next book! Keep up the good work.

Fast pace

I like the flow. Not stagnant or drawn out. The mass suicide was very unexpected. I will continue with the series.

Unexpected

There is a lot of dialogue among the characters. You mentioned the names of who is talking throughout which helps. So many layers.....so many books to read! Very good!

Modern day soap.

There is no surprise or depth to this book. An easy read, but a well written one. I do appreciate the honesty and brightness of the child that calls the parents to the carpet, which usually happens in real life.

What the....

This is too much!!!! I cannot believe this! You are so wrong for this! You better have another book to bring this to an end. How much more can these kids take! I mean, really!!!

Mouth on the floor

I did not expect to get so caught up in this story. You definatley know how to weave a story, especially with so many characters....whew!!! This is a good series, not typical to the other teenage stories I've read. Keep going.

Nice

This was a good one. Love these characters. Hope to see more of them. There were not many grammar mistakes in this book compared to others, and I love your balance of dialogue between the characters.

Yes yes yes!

I liked everything about this story. I could relate. The passion between the characters was palpable to say the least. You are a great writer, keep it up.

Love This!

A sweet true love story. It wasn't as sexually charged as other books, but it was a good read.

Manipultor!

Manipulator
The plot was very good. All the emotional angst was appealing. I'm glad that you brought it to a head at the end; definitely do a part 2 of this!

Eyes Glued!

I could not stop reading this story. The plot was smartly written for an adult audience with adult issues. You should definitely continue writing in this vein.

Family Ties

This novel moved so fast, it was harder to keep up with all the moving parts. The ease of the acceptance of Dallas was a little off putting given the graveness of the impending war. I enjoyed the Riley twist! Keep writing, it will be great to see the culmination of the story.

Epic

I've never read a story like this, but it keeps you reading, with bated breath. The description of the love making is vivid. A true turn on.