What is your opinion?
My review!!
"It was a great start to a story!! There is only one chapter out, but I can already tell it will be amazing. The plot really makes you feel sympathetic towards the main character, which leaves you hoping she gets a better life when she meets the main male lead."
Very interesting!
"Its a wonderful start to a book! I think the grammar and punctuation need some work, however it could be from transferring it from a document to here, So it could just need to be revised. I like the little details that were portrayed that helped me imagine the environment! I would go into a bit more detail on the backstory but to each their own! I can wait to read more and see what happens! Looking forward to new and upcoming chapters. <3"
Good Start
"This is a good start and curious to see more! I can definitely feel for the main character and would love to see how this develops. Be mindful of your grammar and sentence structure but I can easily be fixed! Keep Writing! -Nsablo"
