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Awesome Story!

"I think that this story is really interesting. I love the vocaloid it's based on and I find this story an amazing twist. Yes, the characters aren't all in accordance with the vocaloid, but the change in them fits the plot very well. The author has a fantastic writing style, and overall I am intrigued by the story (mostly the plot line)."

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Well done!

"The story flows and is written very well. I hope to see more chapters in the future! The choice of words and descriptive language is superb, the only critique I have is that the plot picked up a little slowly at first."

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