What is your opinion?
Fast paced story
"Can't wait to read more of your books, hooked and loved the fact its a fast paced book and can't wait for more, Loved it! "
Love Dominance & Suppression
"I like fast pace of the story. I would recommend this one to anyone looking for a quick read. I like this story because it keeps you hooked. "
Good girl
"Good story "
Idk lol
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Dominance suppression & love
"Write more Now. Your plot twists are amazing, if a little bit confusing at times . I have to find out what happens next. PLEASE update Soon. I have to know 🤔 "
Great story
"Great read "
Can't wait for the next update!!
"There aren't many grammar issues so the Nigel is easy to follow. The plot is phenomenal. The characters are well developed. "
Interesting
"It's a good story and I was hoping she would of been stronger when she was kidnapped. But it's an interesting plot. "
Great
"Great read , really enjoying it"
Alright
"Alright read"
Messy.
"There was so much you could have done with this story. The book is all over the place, she met her mate and no emotions were described. She can kick ass during training sessions but she’s defenseless against the rogues. Then she easily moves on from her mate and decides to take another mate simply because she can’t fight her way out of getting kidnapped. Did she forget about Xzavier? How did she feel a mate pull to Lothian if she had a current mate? I know you stated that the mate bond was fading since Xzavier didn’t mark or mate her, nor did they get to know each other. But is she not feeling any pain or tempting feeling to go to Xzavier? I thought second chance mates were given if something happened to their first mate. There are many grammatical errors and some mistakes. Such as when Lothian and Lilianna decided to mate, she states she’s a virgin but I believe that the rogue leader raped her as shown in a flashback. I can’t remember reading the moment when Lothian told Lilianna what was happening and why he saved her. The book is also a bit rushed as we don’t get to see Lothian and Lilianna bond, it would have helped to see the relationship between them grow to understand how she easily forgot about Xzavier. I also forgot about school, what did they end up doing about her going to school? Overall, I just wished you spent more time with details in the story and plot. It had a lot of potential that ended up being wasted. "
So much potential...potentially wasted
"This book has potential, but I feel like too many things get skimmed over. Emotions aren't explained... how can someone find their mate and have no emotions explained. Was she scared? Nervous? Exited to finally mate? Then when taken, move on so easily... I'm almost at the end and am put off of finishing it. "
Ridiculous
"Words in the wrong content, misspelled words, no use of punctuation marks. The story is all over the place."
