Willica Clark-Williams

It's okay.

What can I say? It's still in process of being written to it's competition. At the moment it's okay.

Okay

Good read. Lot of grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. But it's a good read.

Good

The book is very interesting, exciting and make you want more, but there are a lot of words that are not in the right context. You would think the author would notice this or someone would let her know so that she would edit it correctly. There are a lot of run on sentences, not enough punctuations. Where there's a question, there's a comma instead of a question mark. Where the sentence should end and begin a new, there is a comma instead of a period. Throughout there are a lot of errors, but the book is awesome, the plot is good and I can't wait to read more.

Mmhhmm

It need working on. Some of the words don't go with the sentences to where they're not making any kind of sense, there are no question marks where there are questions, some of the sentences are a bit run on, bit the plot is good. I'm interested.

Awesome

I enjoyed this book. I was mad, sad, I wanted to cry and I wanted to kick butt. I wanted them together and I didn't. I wanted to slap fire on their faces and I wanted to comfort them.

Okay.

Words are misspelled, aren't in the right context and little use of punctuations correctly. You don't use paragraphs correctly either. The story was good, bit need editing and more work.

Awesome

Love it. I love the characters.

Interesting

It's interesting. Things in the beginning don't add up, but it's interesting.

Hooked

If you thought book one and two were just okay, baby, book three will get you hooked and reeled in. It has the action and drama I was looking for.

It's okay.

Some chapters are a little boring and then there are some that are so exciting that you just want to know what happens next. It took them way too long for them to complete their mating process, but I guess it was worth it... I gueeesssss. Do, anyway, read the book, you'll like it!

I like it

Still here reading. I'm enjoying Emma's and Matteo's journey.

Still interested

Well, I still love the characters and their growth. The writing is the same, so is the errors that have yet and maybe will not be corrected. The plot is awesome and like I said before, I'm still interested.

I'm interested

I'm enjoying the characters and their growth, but the writing is sloppy. I use my phone to write too and my phone has autocorrect, I'm sure the author phone has that feature too. Also, while writing or before submitting the work, why not proof read? Some of the sentences doesn't make sense and I'm wondering when, will she come back to correct the mistakes. I like the plot so far, but please don't use your writing on your phone as an excuse.

It's a good read!

I'm enjoying the characters and their growth. I only wish that his sister didn't actually die.

It's okay, but it's moving slow.

It's alright, if you like a slower than slow pace. To me, in my opinion, it's starting to get boring. There's not a lot of excitement or suspicion to keep me entertained.

Wow!

I've never read a novel like this. I want him to suffer not her. He's garbage not her.

It's alright.

It's okay. Some of the words are misspelled, so that let's me know that the author is from overseas. Thank you for the read.

Interesting!

Love the plot. The character development is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Oooooooh Gurl!

🔥🔥🔥🔥 like fire! Girl, this is the bomb diggity! Get your hands on it, you'll e mad a lot, bit it's worth it!😉☺️

Awesome

I can't wait to read what happens next!

I'm so interested!

I'm interested, but it is poorly written. Some of the sentences are not in the right context and words that should be in a sentence are not in the sentence. Like I said, it's interesting and I am interested, but the writing isn't great.

😤I would like to roll my eyes, but it's a little interesting.🙄😒

Some of the spelling and punctuations aren't good. There are a lot of run on sentences, but I don't think any of you would care about that. The leading girl is an airhead who pretends to be strong. The leading man is an idiot who hates humans but love to have sex with them. It's interesting I can tell you that much, but you will get annoyed by a lot of things.

Annoying to read.

I'm annoyed that Felix is too overbearing. And she had range training, why is she not hitting her targets? Why is she not showing her strength as she did with the pepper brothers? She's showing to much weakness, I feel, and that's why he's scared instead of happy and proud. This is annoying to read.

It's Alright.

Good read. Nice time.

Nice book to read, but needs work

Sighed not signed when he's breathing in frustration. There are other words that need working on, but right now, I can't remember them. Please don't take my constructive criticism as negative, but positive to help you with your writing. I do like the story and am very interested since I have all three books in my library right now.

It okay!

I love the plot and the story so far,.

Just my opinion

Author needs to know when to use punctuations. Most of the sentences are on going and you don't know when the new one begins. Also, with the POV's, it would say this person, but ends up someone else, so that's confusing to the reader. The book seems good, so I'm going to continue to read and give my opinions throughout. Author, I hope you take my construction criticism in a positive way and not negatively. I'm only trying to help you improve on your writing skills.☺️

Ooooooo!

It's a good time for reading. I'm enjoying this little gem!

It's okay

I like it. It's interesting!

Okay

It was alright. Nothing more, nothing less.

It's okay.

It was good until we got to 24.

Wow!

This book is..... I have no words. It was a rollercoaster of emotional and physical trauma, but it was a good read.

Incomplete

It's incomplete. How is it only 11 chapters? It's a good book, but it's incomplete.

Interesting

It was okay. It was interesting from start to finish. It's okay.

It's okay.

I enjoyed this book. Love hate relationship with the lead characters, especially Ella. It's a good book but, (although the author said, she's English and they spell words differently, it got on my nerves.) there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. Thanks for this good read!

It's okay.

There are a bunch of grammatical and punctuation errors. I figured english is not your first language and that's okay, cause you did a good job with the english. You just have a few things to work on. Other than that the book is interesting.

Awesome!

I wish I can write out the word AWESOME in song mode. Like 🎼Awwww🎶eesoooooommmme!🎵 Anyway, I enjoyed reading this book. There are a few misspelled words, grammatical and punctuation errors here and there, but it's an awesome read!😉

It's okay

There's not much to say. It was okay.

It's an okay read.

There are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. The author get words like thought as in you were thinking and taught as in someone teaches you something. Some of the chapters repeat the previous. I know that they're supposed to be of that specific person POV, but some people get annoyed by that and don't want to read what they've already read over again. Other than these few things, the book is awesome and the characters are great.

Interesting.

There are a lot of grammatical errors. Some sentences are repeated. Other than than it's very interesting. Looking forward to reading more.

It's okay.

There are a lot of grammatical errors. Some words aren't in the right content.

Awesome!

There are grammatical errors, so the author should go back and edit once she's finish with her book. Other than that, I love this book. I hope you're not done yet, cause I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing your book!🥰🥰🥰🥰

Is that it?

It was good until the end. Like is that it? It didn't seem like the book was completed. Is there a sequel? We were left in the dark. The book needed at least 4 or maybe 6 more chapters to really make it complete. It think the author need to go back and work on that. There were also grammatical and punctuation errors.

It was okay.

It was okay, but there are a few grammatical errors. Other than that it's fine.

You know I love it!

Awesome sauce! Fantabulous, Terrifamazing! Loved it!

Awesome!

I was waiting for you to update this so a while and when you said that you were going to update it tonight, i got super excited! Thank you so much for this awesome update!😘

Awesome!

Like I commented, you've touch a true feeling we all have gone through. Thank you for writing such beautiful poetry!😘

Awesome!

I really enjoyed reading this book. Although i didn't comment, I really felt no need to. I mean, I was mad at some characters, but I kept it to myself. Thank you for this awesome book author!😘

Need work.

To be totally honest here, this book could be so much better if the author explain some of the situations. Like when asking someone a question, the lead girl just hangs up instead of getting the answer to her question. There are misspelled words, grammatical and punctuation errors and words in the wrong content all over the place. When the author says she's dark skin and that her bruises doesn't show because of that, that's a lie cause they will show up no made the shade of brown you are. The author also need to explain the shades of brown some of the characters are. The author really need to go back and do some editing.

Interesting!

There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that it's awesome.

It was okay

There are a lot of grammatical and punctuation errors. Other than that, it's okay.

I was blown away.

I loved it. Every single chapter, I loved it. Very interesting and beautiful book!

Wow.

There are a lot of spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors all over this book. I had to stop reading in chapter 3 because I couldn't take it anymore. Please go back and edit your work.

It's okay.

There are a few misspelled words and a lot of grammatical and punctuation errors. Please edit. Other than that the plot is good and look forward to more.

Needs work.

The book was good, but... Words were misspelled, there were grammatical and punctuation errors and it seems like, although the author said she's doing this for fun, the author just put any word down. Some of the sentences don't make sense and it's like she wants us to figure out what she's trying to say. The author needs to go back and edit this book and other books that she's written. This not me being mean and cruel, this is just my honest opinion.

Great

It's good. There are some misspelled words here and there, but the writing is good and the plot is good to but there are some parts that confused me. Overall it's good and you will enjoy it.

You be the judge.

There are a lot of misspelled words, grammatical and punctuation errors. Words not in the right content, confusion, the works. But the plot is good and the book is good overall. You just have to ignore all the things I mentioned.

BEWARE you will get confused a lot

There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. There are a lot of words in the wrong content. The author is confused about the male leads name and his eye color. The plot is good and the book is good, it's just confusing as heck. So BEWARE!

Loved it

Loved it. Was so sad about some of the characters and cried. It's an awesome read! Thanks author for this wonderful book!

Hmmmm

Grammatical errors, misspelled words. Author need to keep up with the ages. Other than that is okay.

Being honest not rude.

The book, although it was okay it wasn't the greatest. Misspelled words, missing words, words out of context and misuse of punctuations. In some part of the story it's confusing. The lead male is verbally and physically abusive. The lead female doesn't know her worth and doesn't respect herself. The author need to go back and do some editing. Like I said it's okay, but it's not the greatest.

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There are a lot of words in the wrong place, some words are misspelled.

Awesome

I've never read a mafia book before. Different from the werewolf books that I read, but similar in the possessiveness. It was amazing and thank you for taking the time out to write it!

It's good, but author gave up on it too soon.

There are a lot of missing words, misspelled words and words out of content. This book isn't finished. I think the author gave up on it. It is a good story, but the author gave up on it too soon.

OMG IT'S SO GOOD!

I've never read a book like this, so I had to push myself to read it. After the first chapter, i was hooked. It was so entertaining, i enjoyed every bit of it! Thank you for an awesome, well thought out book!

I was glued!

Although there were some misspelled words and words out of place, the story was awesome. I really enjoyed!

Edit

There are a lot of misspelled words, repeated words, words out in content, sentences that don't even make sense. Please go back and edit. Other than that it was a good read. The plot was great.

I'm not sure if this is done or not.

Some words are misspelled and put into the wrong content. Some sentences are not complete and some are confusing. I know some folks don't mind trying to figure out what the writer is trying to say, but it shouldn't be a norm, as in it shouldn't be normal. You need to go back and edit. Overall, the plot is good and the story is awesome. I don't know if it's complete or what, but I feel it's not done. You still have ways to go.

Awesome sauce

It's good, it's good, it's goooood!

It was good

I never read a western before. Heck, i got bored whenever my dad or mom looked at them. But this was interesting. I enjoyed. Thank you!

I am quite

I skipped to the end after chapter, i don't know. I got as far as her getting her leg hurt. I didn't feel any excitement, there wasn't a good pull. To each his own. I may not have enjoyed it, but someone else will.

Loved it!

Loved the book. Only thing is that you should really go back and edit it when you have the time. Thank you for sharing your story!😘🥰

Okay.

So many misspelled words it will drive you crazy. Overall, it's a good book to read, but author needs to go back and edit really bad.

Eh, i shrugged my shoulders.

I like the book, but some parts are boring and you just want to get to the good stuff. Some words like Launched is spelled wrong. But please keep it up. This is your first book and everyone ain't the best. Do what you feel is right and keep doing it until you prefect it. Listen to constructive criticism and don't go on the defensive. Say "thank you!" and keep it moving. ☺️

Awesome

Words were misspelled, but over all was a great book to read.

Great

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks!

It's ok

Some words are not in the right content and a few are misspelled. It's an okay book.

Great story, but.........

Wonderful story, but there are a lot of misspelled words, words not in the right context, repeated words, run on sentences, incomplete sentences, not using punctuations correctly, I mean the list goes on and on. But the plot was good and the story was good. I just feel it's incomplete. But if that's how you write your books, then to each his own!

Awesome

The story is good, but you're not using questions marks and quotation marks where they should appear. Thank you for the story!

Great

I was on edge a few times. Kept me interested.

Great

I'm enjoying this read.

Ahh!

Spelling, word misplaced or not in the right content. I wasn't feeling female lead through the middle to the end and why did Xanders parents have to die? I kinda knew they were, so that the lead female could adopt a child 🙄. It okay to read if you like a lot of clerical errors and a bit of selfishness from the female lead. To each his own!

Good.

It was an awesome read. Thank you!

Oooooo girl!

I was glued! Girl, this was some good stuff! I loved it! Can't wait for the conclusion!

Where do I begin?

Missing words. Some words are not in the right order, but it's interesting.

Interesting

There were a lot of misspelled words. He met her when he was 18 years old and she was 6 years old, that is a 12 year difference, but throughout the book you kept saying 13 years. She was 18 when they got married and he was 30, that's still 12 years. Overall, the book was interesting and I enjoyed it. You need to go back and change a few things though.

Awesome

Loved-ed it! Awesome!

I'm high off this!

I'm so in love with your work! Awesome!

Love it

Girl, you know I love all your work. So I can't say too much about it, only that I love it!

Loved it.

Layla/Michelle, that chick got on my nerves to honest with you, but this is a good read. Thank you!

Enjoyed it

I was so glued to this book. I loved it so much!

Loved it!

I enjoyed reading this book. Took me two days to fi ish it, but that's okay! Loved it!

Awesome!

It was awesome sauce! The only thing that bothered me was some of the words were in the wrong context, but it was awe! I loved every bit of it.Good job author!

Okay.

Some words aren't in the right context. Author is not explaining situations clearly, but overall I'm interested. Hope you he writing gets better.

Hmmmm, what should I say?

The writing is really terrible. All the characters speak as if they were from the hood. Some words are misspelled. I had to hurry up and get through this because lead female attitude was just outrageous and it just got uninteresting. After Chapter 30 it started to get boring.

Awesome

It was a good read. It had me mad, sad, upset, frustrated, annoyed, confused, scared and happy. Wish there were more, but I'm content!

I'm in love

I'm so in love with these characters. There are a few misspelled words, but it doesn't take away from the wonderfulness, fàntaslicious book you've created. Thank you for taking your time out of your day to write this. Keep up the wonderful creativeness that flows through you!

Sadness, anger and finally Happiness!

First, you need a spell check on your computer or phone. Second, you need to do some editing. Even if you have to go back and re-read what you wrote cause like I said, you need a spell check. There are misspelled words in every chapter. Third, this was a good book to read. I enjoyed and was happy after reading. Thank you for taking your time out to write an excellent book. Keep up the good work, but add a spell check and do some editing!😘

I have to be honest

The plot was okay, but your writing style is not so great. Your grammar and punctuations need a lot more work. I loved the book, but was frustrated reading it. You need to do some editing and take your time writing. Don't rush it. Also as I made comments before, there are chapters that are repeating. Chapters 2 and 5 are repeated. Please go back and take them down cause it does ruin the reading experience.

Wow

In chapter 6 and basically majority of the chapters you need to go back and do some editing. For instance '3 am in the night's should be '3 am in the morning' or this one ' It had become a habit for me from past 13 years.' should be 'For the past 13 years it had become a habit' or ' It has become a habit for the past 13 years.' Oh, I have a lot more but I don't want to waist your time. Point is and I see your learning to spell check, editing and making sure all the words, sentences and paragraphs are in the right context and are making sense! Enjoyed reading this. Please stop spacing out your updates we want to know what's going to happen next!

Okay

The author kept misspelling words like Jesus and using words sometimes in the wrong context. But it was a good read. I wish there were no witches or demons in it. I was going to stop reading it because of it, but I was already invested and wanted to see what happened. I don't read books like that cause it's evil. But like it said it was good. Just need to work on spelling and using words in the right context.

Glued!

I was glued to this book. Loved the characters and the plot. Enjoyed it this ..........................................................................................................................................much!

Good

I enjoyed reading this book. The female character is of course ridiculously child because she's young. I got mad at her a few times. Overall great book. Keep up the good work!

Need work

Grammar, punctuations, spelling and editing. You need to work on these things. I can't say that this is an awesome book because a hundred is a hundred and a thousand is a thousand. Two totally different numbers. So it makes the information inaccurate. The book is a bit rushed. Take your time it doesn't need to speed up and not give good info about this and have inaccurate about that. So take your time, do something editing, make sure you spell words correctly and have fun while doing it.

It's good

I like it. It's good! Can't wait for more.

Loved it!

Wow, this book had me laughing so much. I was mad at Hudson for a while. We all were, but he changed for the better which made the book even more better.

It was awesome!

Wonderful writing. Loved the plot and the characters and enjoyed every chapter!

Awesome Sauce!

There were a few misspelled words, but the book was awesome! Loved it!

Like the characters

Some words are not in the right context and are misspelled. Overall good book, just wish witches and shaman's weren't in the novel.

Good

Good. I like the characters.

Erm......

The plot is awesome. I like the characters, but your writing style needs help. You misspelled a lot of words, punctuations on the spots, some of them not all, words in the wrong context. Download an editing app to help you out with that or ask someone for help. Good novel I will say, but get help with the editing please?

Interesting

There were word and sentences that would throw you off. Misspelled words. It drove me crazy, but...... This is a good book and I liked it. Antiope, I wanted to strangle half the time, but it was enjoyable.

It's okay!

Cinderella! But this is a twist on it. She had a little sick brother and the prince could be mean and ruthless of he wanted. But most of the time, the prince was happy! Liked it.

Hmmmm, what should I say?

The book was good, but started to get taken over by all the drama that sometimes I couldn't keep up. I can't say it was boring cause I was always glued to it, bit I'm some areas it need a little work. The spelling and the punctuation need work. But overall the book was okay.

Loved it

Awesome and I'm glad you didn't end it with a pregnancy or with kids 4 years later. And I'm happy that it wasn't dark! I've read a lot of novels where they ended up pregnant or that they had kids on down the road. Either they have the kids now or not, it shouldn't matter. They novel was wonderful and I enjoyed it.

Love!

I love this book also! It was funny, sad. It was very entertaining!

I have no words!

This maybe my favorite. I was happy, sad, scared! I loved it and I can't wait to read more!

Ooooh Girl!

Wonderful. I love it. Can't wait for more! Standing ovation!

I. Am. Hooked!

OMG, I was squilling, laugh, scared, happy and I want more of this. This is a very interesting book. I'm in love. There are very few books that make me feel this way and this is one of them!

Love

Loves it! I am so into this book! Keep it coming!

I'm interested baby!

Awesome! Can't wait for more!

Ridiculous

Words in the wrong content, misspelled words, no use of punctuation marks. The story is all over the place.

Okay.

A lot of misspelled words and words in the wrong context.

It was okay.

A lot of run on sentences. Misuse of punctuation marks and a few words misspelled. Overall it was a good read, but it could've gotten a little deeper if the author took her time with the characters developments. We never knew what happened to Olivia.

It was interesting!

I was glued to the story and I finished it in one day! I like the characters except Emily and her mother Helen, but I guess that's expected! Overall it is a good read!

It's okay

Update: I love it! Thanks Grimmy!🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖😘

Great, but Belle overthinks things a lot and it gets annoying.

Awesome, but Belle overthinks things a lot and it gets annoying. But overall it's an awesome read!

Awesome

Awesome read. Some words aren't spelled correctly or put in the right concept, but it's awesome and I fell in love with Adlaric! He is dreamy!

Good!

It's good, it's good!

I loved it!

I love the novel, don't get me wrong but there were some words that were out of place or that didn't need to be in a sentence. Overall the book was AMAZING, AWESOME, INSPIRING and INSPIRATIONAL! Thank you so much for taking time out of your days and schooling to write such a wonderful story! Love it and keep up the good work!

I love it! It's awesome!

I would recommend this book to anyone. I'm loving the pace and I'm excited to read more! Good job author!

It's okay.

You misspelled a lot of words like realize, realized and realization and you're=you are. You put words where they shouldn't be like I'd had, I'd was , etc. Please use proper grammar and don't use your everyday speech.

I love it!!!!

I don't like misspelled words or in correct wordings., But overall, this novel is awesome and I love it!

Falling For The Alpha

I don't like how the writer misspelled word or put wonts in the wrong context or sentence. Overall, I loved the story.