What is your opinion?
Waiting for it to be done
"The previews were great. I do want to see the full story though, the exploration of the concept of love in Chapter 1 proved to have good potential. Good luck and keep on writing well! :)"
Salvino
"The storyline is interesting, although I do wish that the chapters were a little longer. For example, chapters one and two could have been conjoined. Some words can be replaced with synonyms to keep the flow without making it seem as of there is any repetition, but this can be easily fixed. There are times where information of the characters are given throughout the story, but other times where it feels as if it's just put on front of the reader all of a sudden. This is only the beginning of the story, but I did enjoy it. The dialogue had gotten a bit confusing at some points where I couldn't tell which character was speaking because of the separation. For each character, the dialogue should be together if the same character is speaking; in the end, this is another factor that can easily be fixed. I can't wait to see what more happens in the future with these characters!"
