3/5 ⭐️

"Bullies are terrible, and kids, believe it or not, can be one of the meanest people out there. I wish you would have gone into more detail about that. Like, maybe write a prologue or a memory about how mean Ethan was to her? Show us a chapter where her brother took her to learn some self-defense. That, and you could also work on some humanizing. Whenever your characters interact with each other, they don't really sound like people. Keep working hard, you're off to a great start."