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A Nostalgic Read

"I must applaud this book for reminding me of the vampire romances I used to read in high school. The primal descriptions are intensely captivating, and the characters' haunting pasts make their longing to escape into something disapproving realistic and relatable. I recommend this kind of story to anyone that likes a good Dracula, forbidden romance. It was a pleasant taste of nostalgia for me. My only gripe is in technicalities that are making the style suffer. I would recommend a grammar check in a word processor - like Microsoft Word or Google Docs - to straighten out the tense and spelling. Take it one chapter at a time, but that's the only revision I can think to tell you. Well done otherwise!"

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Severuz Vampires Saga Book 1: Stained Innocence

"I like the plot twist of the story and its unpredictable ending. This type of story is what I and my friends are looking for so I would recommend it to them. "

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