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Good
"There are many grammatical errors and your word choices should be changed a little. Apart from that, this small story was really heart touching. The show of first love and how it can't be forgotten. Good! Please improve your grammar a bit though."
Awesome Style and Emotional Ending
"1. I like this story because it is very connective with everyone and it contains very powerful and emotional message of love,empathy and reality. 2 . I want to recommend this book to everyone who is intrested in love stories as its a beautiful love story with strong message and I want dedicate this to my wife Shamal. "
