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Amalia Ford

"The author cover the subject adequately. He also covers all aspects of the subject in a balanced fashion. His approace to the story line is very descriptive. I find his manner of writing to be eloquent and well structured. Although it is a short storie, it is very entertaining and mind binding, Best Regards Amalia"

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A Visitor in the Woodland

"Story unwinds slowly, gradually building suspense, then really takes off. I was impressed by BK's effort. Lots of subtle fright power that should appeal to teenagers , but is too sophisticated for younger readers. . . What bothers me is how oblivious Clayton's parents seem to be about the threatening presence. As for the cop I don't understand his attitude. Milton seems to treat the horrifying viper in a rather cavalier fashion. Is he having fun at Clayton's expense? Or does he believe in the legend? Hard to say."

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