What is your opinion?
This needs rewriting and editing
"I am sorry but this is bearly written in English, there are way too many mistakes, grammar and spelling issues it makes this so difficult to read and consequently understand, I made it to the last chapter and it was really painful and the worst part is there are only two chapters. This urgently needs rewriting and editing, Advice to the author would be to get a grammar and spelling software like Grammarly and some editing software like Hemingway to ensure this is at least readable. The good thing is the plot is actually OK but the poor English is just slaughtering this story."
