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AWESOME

"This was really creepy and fascinating to read. Loved every bit of it. 🙃😊"

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Welcome Home

"This was an excellent read! It was like watching a modern, low-key Horror movie, but in words! The banter between Asher & Bastian is realistic, & the situational-plot just as real. The progressive treatment of the relationship between the protagonists is a PLUS! My only suggestion is to write from only one Point of View--either First Person or Third, in "Welcome Home"'s case... Honestly, one of the best pieces I've read on Inkitt!"

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epilogue

"scary"

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