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Good

"An interesting start.The story really piqued my interest.Will wait for the rest of the chapters to be updated. The promising start has me hooked.❤"

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Pretty good

"Just wish there was more"

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Compelling

"Romance novels can always be a bit odd and not very good, but this one has a great start. I like how it isn't like 'she saw him and now their instantly in love'. I am excited to find out what the characters are going to do next because there is a good amount of suspense. I think to make it better you could maybe make a passing comment or something as to why Hazel hates Cyrus so much. But other than that it is a really good start."

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