Lovely~

"Oohh I adored this story! Just the right amount of creepiness, mixed in with a few ''real life'' monsters. You had me hooked from the start! Childhood is often where our scariest monsters lie.... Getting to plot, I love, LOVED the twist at the end. That was great. I would have never guess a doll to be involved in all of this....or that their was a fourth member of the family. I'd like to think the monster was around to watch out for the boy, rather than hurt him. After all, brothers are supposed to watch out for each other.. And it seems the only real danger present to the boy was his father and the gun. Where the creature in the attic came, well...that's a different story. Overall, I thought this story was fantastic. Aside from a few awkward sentences, your writing was splendid. Way to capture the horror vibe!"