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An old woman, Anna Miller, who had always wanted a child of her own. While driving they find a young girl on the streets, she takes the girl in and named her Lily. But was this choice really a mistake? (Also written by Oddgirlout_13)
03/15/1987 Anna Miller
We have found a girl on the side of the road. She is only a toddler. She seems to have been abandoned by her parents. We have always wanted a kid so for now we’re bringing her to our house. She seems to be acting a little strange though. She is continuously rocking back and forth in the corner of the guest room we have and whistling a strange but dark tune. We will keep our eyes on her to make sure she is fine…
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