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Echo's From The Pyramid

"Exciting story though it is very very short. The author could have made it a very good adventure story with lots of action and mystery."

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Thought Provoking....

"Makes you think twice about why the Pyramids were built , a good thought provoking story, or is it true!! Keep up the good work, look forward to your next story / diary."

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Great ideas , a knowledgeable writer

"This has very intriguing premise, good plotting, but the writing style needs to be improved. Liked the main character and Helen, liked the research that was done and the main idea ."

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