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Her.

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Summary

Who is she? What does she want? A twisted tale of secrets has arisen in the land, a tale of mistreatment, suffering, and agonisingly beautiful motives.

Genre
Drama,Romance
Author
Spooky
Status
Excerpt
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter One

She stood, the table crashing to the floor. She'd pushed it with indifference to the various delicate tea sets once balanced so prettily upon it. The click of her shoes signalled a death each time she stepped so ruthlessly, her colleagues bearing the guilt for her.

Click,

click,

click,

click.

Gunshots fired as she raised a cold, delicate hand, nails so perfectly filed in a pretty fashion. A small smile played on her lips, pure as it had been on the day she was born.

“Bring the cavalry,” she said, “We'll take the higher elite's' quarters first.”

At her command, seven white horses emerged, each with a different shape dyed black upon its forehead: diamond, triangle, star, cross, clover, moon, and a heart for the priestess.

A clap summoned the six owners, respectively, and they each mounted a mare and swung their satchels before heading down an assigned pathway.

“Come, love, we shall ride.”

At this, the seventh horse trotted obediently towards her and she lightly swung her slim figure onto it, pulling a black cloak upon her pale shoulders and shielding her face with the shadow given to her by the hood.

A kiss of the heart, she raised a hand in goodbye before fleeing the bloodied scene.

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This is really just a thing I wrote because I was bored. I posted it because I'd like feedback/critique, and I'd really appreciate it if you left some in the comments.

7 years

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