Inkitt
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Awsome

"Pls finish the book soon and finish after "

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Excerpt not bad

"The story so far interested me enough to wish to continue reading. I found few mistakes in punctuation and grammar but a good editing and polishing should get the story more enjoyable. I read it's an excerpt but I'd be curious to read the all story. that's why I gave only three stars to the plot, I can't figure it all out, I'm still missing few things. Good reading :) Bianca"

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