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A story like no other

"I would like cam and Sydney to end up being in a relationship. Otherwise it is quite interesting indeed."

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Heal My Heart by RNDeen

"I love this story extremely. Thank you fit sharing your words with us. Your characters are refreshing and going to miss them."

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I LOVE IT!!

"I absolutely love. I can't put it down, I need to finish it. I wish I had me a Cameron or even a Nick. This was absolutely worth the read and getting yelled at to get up and put away the dishes but I had to finish the chapters before I even attempted to."

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Confusing

" I love the book honestly but I just wanted to ask is it complete is there a second part because I feel like there's something missing but overall it's a great book thank you"

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heal my heart

"awesome thanks for the story"

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Love it

"Love the story, the punchline. The stories between the characters so interesting. Interesting from start to finish. Wants to read more stories from this author."

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Heal My Heart

"a. The setting of the story is appropriate. The plot of the story is good and also the story is so cool. I can also relate to the story. b. The author use the first person point of view. It connects the readers to the story. When they read it, they will feel the emotions of the character. c. I like the story of how they meet, how their friendship and love story starts and I like also the character of the story. If I have a time to read, I will continue to read. This story is so cool. d. I suggest that you need to develop your grammar so that the readers understand it better. But I like your work. I like your story and it is so amazing."

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You spelt friendly wrong in the blurb...

"Good story"

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Awesome story

"It's just amazing . Me and my sister loves your story .it's my favourite book .I loved the characters very much especially the bonding of the siblings and their friendship ."

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Please complete the book

"Amazing,Keep it up"

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Osum Story❤❤

"I loved d story❤❤ Its really so cool...I hope u write more chapters of this story...Waiting for it😍😍"

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Love the book

"Fantastic book, I cant wait to read more <3. please update"

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LOVE LOVE LOVE!!

"There may have been many grammar errors. But OMG this story had me on an emotional rollercoaster ride. I loved every bit of it. The relationship Sydney and Cameron had was beautiful. I loved how it wasn't a typical love story but revolved around a growing friendship and the drama that surrounded it. PLEASE make a part two to this story. But on that note maybe make sure you correct majority of your grammatical errors. "

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I WISH IT GETS PUBLISHED!!!! AWESOME STORY!!!!!!

"OMG!!!!!! I REALLY LOVED IT!!!!!!!! I REALLY HOPE THAT IT GETS PUBLISHED!!!!! AND, TO THE OTHER PEOPLE WRITING A REVIEW, THE WRITER'S GRAMMAR ISN'T HORRID! I THINK IT'S MORE LIKELY THAT THEY WERE ALL TYPOS... YOU KNOW HOW SOME PHONES HAVE AUTOCORRECT OR IT JUST REALLY COULD'VE BEEN ALL TYPOS SO.... DON'T JUDGE KAY??!!! "

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Great story

"No a fence to the people who wrote those reviews but u are being to judgmental for a few silly little mistakes anyway I really like your story maybe go back and try to fix those mistakes but also please do not give up I really liked your story. And I know you can get far with it so yeah. "

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