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The rattle

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Summary

This story is made by a teenager and it's about a girl who is interested in paranormal stuff and don't know the consequences of it . It is a horror children's novel and anyone can read pls read the story further

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

CHAPTER 1 FEAR

DUM.... DUM... Open the door


Yes this is the movement I realized okay let's start from the beginning

One day when I was young I started watching movies and only "ghost movies"But my dad and mom scolded me a lot because of this every single time I used to believe there were ghost. But one day I told my mom that I want to go to a place where it was haunted, my mom and dad did not know that the place was haunted as it was a special day my parents did not want to disappoint me. I was such a idiot that in my 7year old mind I thought I can be friends with the ghost or whatever. So I was praying to God that I wanted to make sure that it (ghost) was my friend, I was so happy to go and did not worry about the consequences and circumstances as a 7 year old girl. But you know what my dad began to start a conversation he asked "why do you want to go there and that place?"opps no I started stumbling and my dad was suspicious so I told "ahhhhhh... just mm.."my dad started to Google the place and now I was 🤯 totally out of mind I knew he would but not this quick as I was a kid I really did not know so much about Google. After my dad made a big turn to home and he did not speak to me the whole day but we went to a luxury restaurant and ate dinner it was late at night like 12:40 so my parents were tired of driving so we booked a room and we all went to sleep after that we went home next morning and my dad took my phone and kept with him for 7 days like 1 week I was scared and angry he stopped me from watching horror videos hmm..........omg please I promise with cross in my hand.



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