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Poesías escritas sobre la marcha

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Me veo en la Brigida

Me veo en la Brigida

en esquinas alamédicas.

De una democracia imperféctica.

En la esquina de un sonoro ceachehi ... Allí me mataron.

[Muerto, Muerto] En demasía.

Asesinado con alevosía [Ría ]

en un despertar inconsciente [a carcajadas]

de una nueva moda naciente, la de ser anti [ y mal oliente].

Muerte penca la de morir en colores que detesto; matado a golpes de grises y amarillentos entre Santo Domingo y O`higgins, una bandera se asoma sola sobre el celeste y en su patético movimiento, siento un estructural Todo Esta Perdido.

Me veo en la Brigida.

Y de allí no me bajo. [Ni me bajan]

No lo lograron los pacos [o pacas]

No lo lograron los yippies, [Ni papas]

No lo lograron los ecos del desierto.

Ni a métricas matemáticas ni a tétricas metracas.

Muerte fea la de morir en defensa propia

en estado de catastrofe.

Me veo en la Brigida

Trigida.

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