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What is your opinion?
Really good
"I've said before that teen romance books are not my thing, but this one was by far the best I've read. It was a bit wordy but it helped you get a nice picture of the world around, so I don't know what you should do. Only minor mistakes. For one I noticed that you called Melissa "Hannah" in what I think was chapter three. Also I honestly did not understand what happened in the end. Maybe be less figurative so it's more obvious. But other than that it was really good."
Do not know
"I took a break so far so good"
