What is your opinion?
Enjoyable.
"I liked this but doubt if the wife would escape justice because her daughter made the cake. I can hear the daughter telling the police -" mummy gave me all the ingredients.". The story flows well but needs a little tightening here and there. I wish many of the other stories on this site were of a similar standard.."
Creepy
"For a short story, you sure managed to pack a lot in here, and I definitely admire that. It was very interesting with a chilling ending. Your writing was well done, and I didn't notice any problems. I would have liked to know more about the setting though. I think you mentioned her being apart of a tribe? Like an indian tribe or something totally different? A little clarification would help. Either way, good work! And good luck in the contest!"
