What is your opinion?
I love this! 🥰
"So I really love the plot and the characters! Olive is so bad ass and clearly is a strong female! Rose is pretty cool and funny. Kyle sounds kinda hawt, ngl. You should really continue this, you left me in suspense and wanting more!!! I really want to see how Kyle and Olive go. You’re entry wasn’t too shabby. Just needs a bit of tweaks and turns. Your dialogue needs to be restructured and so does your paragraphs. But other than that, ITS AMAZING! Keep writing, you’re amazing! ♥️♥️♥️"
Needs work, but good
"I hope you don't find this review to be rude. It does need work primarily in punctuation. When writing a conversation every time a new character speaks there should be a new paragraph. Also not all your sentences had capitalization, which is a must. And there was one point in the first chapter where you call Olive 'Olivia' which is odd. Now this story really isn't my thing, but it is good. I like the twist at the end of the third chapter, it does make you wonder what happens next. So it's not a bad plot, just needs to be cleaned up. It does have some high school romance cliches but maybe those can be worked out. Overall it's not a bad story though and I do like the plot."
