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What is your opinion?

Just sharing.

"I like it so far. I mean as I read it I felt the same sensation when I felt isolated and I... I'm glad I found it. That's all. Thanks."

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Beautiful poetry

"I love this. I really do. It conveys true feeling and emotion, and it is totally relatable. I love that this poem is easy to understand and yet contains layer upon layer of meaning. Your rhythm was flawless and easy to follow. The only reason I marked it down was because in a couple places I think that you used the wrong spelling of a word ("your" as opposed to "you're" if I remember right). Really well done! This poetry was really beautiful!"

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