Very good book!

"You do have a very intriguing plot, and your writing style is very bloody, in a very good way! Quite detailed as well, with the right amount of details without putting off your readers without too much gore. Although I would advise you to up your age-bracket to 18+ (a severed child's head is, I think, a pretty graphic explanation...) but that is your own choice, of course. However, if I may add a tiny bit of critique: You seem to have a slight habit of writing "wrong" words (probably due to autocorrect) like there instead of they're or their. But those are minor details and not even that noticeable. Only if you looking for them, you find them However, this is a very good book! Keep up the good work in any future works you have planned!"