Chapter 1
Marcus was humane toward me.
I think of him as loving.
He would comfort me.
We couldn’t unite.
I was upset.
I anticipate his stillness.
Commotion surrounds me.
There was a lot of water.
I was losing my peace of mind.
I heard words.
Nobody knew.
I made an earnest attempt to arrive at peace.
I heard something loud.
And it disturbed my emotions.
Nobody heard it.
I made a return.
Marcus and I lived here in the past.
I would keep my darling Marcus in my arms.
We shared emotions.
I became aware.
My endeavors had paid off.
His eyes were harmless.
I would become free.
There was no more commotion.
I was tranquil.
I am my own person.
Marcus brings his smile into sight.
He is tender.
He sings with closed lips.
There is now peace.
There are no more challenges.
There is no more trouble.
We now have comfort.
I notice Marcus’ singing by my ears.
He brings me out of my sleep.
He gives me energy.
He gives me power.
He makes me able.
He makes me capable.
He makes me efficient.
He makes me active.
We become active.
I am now present.
Marcus accompanies me.
I am present at the same time as him.
And he is present at the same time as me.
Oh, a single-chapter story that feels like a poem wrapped in fantasy and romance 🌙✨.
Without saying too much, it still reveals so much about Marcus—beautifully written 🤍📖.
A narrator grapples with doubt about their relationship with Marcus, questioning whether he's kind, whether they can be together. The piece moves from fragmented questions to declarative statements, mirroring a shift from uncertainty to resolution. Short sentences build momentum.✨ The structure Q&A carries the narrative weight. A strong opening. Sets up themes of connection, presence, and self-awareness worth following🖤