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Trust in love

"Amazing. I really love the story. Thank u so much author."

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Trust in love

"I like the characters it's a lovely book to read. Looking forward to the follow up."

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LOVED IT!

"I love a lot of things about this story. First of all, character development! Brilliantly done. Second, plot development - Amazing and smooth. One can easily tell that the author thought all the scenes through, before putting them together, because the links and transitions are so smooth. Third, the plays were a huge part of the book and very descriptive. The author brought almost every character in the book under the spotlight, which makes it all the more interesting. Every chapter had me hanging on to the book, waiting for the next chapter to come, because that's just how much anticipation the author built throughout the book. She even ended it with a mild suspense, so you know that there's going to be a sequel, but since it's a 'mild suspense', you can read this book as a standalone as well."

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AMAZING,PERFECTION,MAGNIFICENT!👏👏👏👏👏👏

"Love everything about this book this is one of my favourite books! Your exalent at writing!"

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Nick Eds

"I have read many ebooks and novels especially during the lockdown period of late, and I truly feel that this has by far been my best read. I cannot thank the author enough. Waiting for the new chapters to come through is best described as when Alex read those series of books as a kid and waited for latest book to arrive which Skye then gifted her. Hopeful for many more fantastic chapters ahead. With much much thanks."

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Good good

"It's nice to read"

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Do you trust me?

"Shameless author giving my novel a review. People say us, writers, are our own critics which I think applies to any creator. We set out own standards really high that even when others say it's fine... to us, it can be far from fine. Very far. I decided to leave review here and voice those standards that I want this novel to live up to. 1) I aim to tackle a lot of romantic elements. Contrary to the synopsis, the story has multiple characters. I do say I want to try as many romantic elements as I can but will I have them all happen to the main leads? Absolutely not. That would be way too frustrating. 2) The genre may say that it's a romance but it's a story that focuses on love which actually comes in different forms and not just the common romance we know. That's why the story is tagged as "slow romance." Romance definitely plays a big factor but with that I'd also like to send messages. To not solely focus on having a love life for example. 3) Every part has a reason no matter how insignificant a chapter seems. In the first arc, I use a bit of parallelism to compare the growth that has happened. So when you think I may be dragging the plot... read on for a bit and tell me if the MC made the same mistake twice and didn't learn anything at all from the first time. 4) The story isn't face paced for a reason. I have an outline that already laid out the events and I have found out that the flow is disrupted if I try to pick up the pace. Not only did it affect getting to know the characters but also it feels more forced and thus makes less sense. 5) Lastly (cause I can probably talk all day), I am awesome. Kidding. Or am I? Lol, but seriously, I'm not about to tell you this is the greatest story you'll ever read in your life because even I don't think that but I do try to keep the flow smooth with some spice/unexpected things here and there. Basically, I wouldn't have published it if it was absolute trash. You can have faith in that last part. Did you reach this part? Aww, that's so sweet! For that, I give you my blessing to have an awesome day! Bai~~"

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Trust in Love

"I like the rapport between Alex and Logan;hope Skye is exposed. Would recommend to all tèenagers.🖒"

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Trust in Love

"This is really good, not the every day high school stories with drugs, alcohol, party and sex. It shows that there are different elements to attending high school. It is clean, would make a good movie series. Can"t wait for the next chapters."

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Classic Rom Com

"I think this has great potential, however some edits would make it even better. For instance make it more clear in the beginning that we are getting Logans view by using masculine pronouns when he thinks about Alex. Also there are some weird points where generalizations are made about men and women that arent really true... But I applaud you for writing so much, and I enjoy your plot!"

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