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ANOTHER CHOICE

"Once again, I really loved the story❣️ The characters were realistic and loved the plot. The grammar is a little confusing, but I would have trouble writing in another language. As I read, my mind just auto corrects the wording. You're very talented, and I'm glad there's another book for me to read."

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Another Choice

"Thanks for giving me a chance to read your book it was a fresh breath to know how to forgive oneself and learn to live in this world .I love magic and fantasy with werewolves in it you gave me all a story that's reality in it.I do hop or think you can still writing on Lana as a story of the Wich giver a chance in a book."

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Another Choice

"What a great follow up from Another End!!! I loved it!!! Great characters, great plot & great ending!!! No need to gush over the story but I did!!! I am so loving all your stories & I am ready for a new book!!! Thank you that you make each story fresh & exciting!!! You don’t disappoint me at all!!!"

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Excellent!

"Wow…I really enjoyed your book! Minor grammar issues but nothing I couldn’t make out. Characters were fabulous and the storyline fantastic! You kept me on my toes with the twists and turns!!! Great job, Author!!"

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Another Choice

"Love this book."

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Penny brewer

"Another enjoyable read"

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Another choice

"Really really good I loved it. Ok a few spelling mistakes but who cares cause I didn't. As I still enjoyed reading the book. So thank you"

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Loved it

"I loved both books. Nice writing. "

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Another choice

"Great book sad but good. I hope sge keeps her mate and that They both are happy and can have that complete love for eachother."

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Another choice

"There were some mistakes but Loved this book. By far one of my favorites. Please write more books. You are by far one hell of an author"

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Another Choice

"Omg!! I am so happy with the way this story ended! Absolute perfection!! ❤️"

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Potential

"I've taken a look through and decided it was worth the shot. Going to enjoy it! ;) - S.W."

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Best book ever

"This is even better than the first book... I really didint thought it was possible"

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Selina

"While I find the writing style difficult again due to author's learning English, I love the characters and her story line. DO NOT LIKE THE PEOPLE READING WHO FEEL THEY ARE THE GRAMMER NAZI'S AND DECIDE THEY NEED TO MAKE CORRECTIONS AT THE END OF EACH PAGE. HONESTLY, I THINK THE ERRORS, IF I WOULD EVEN CALL THEM THAT ARE ENDEARING "

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Nissi

"Omg poor selena!!! "

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Enjoyable reading!

"I have read all of your books on this site and enjoyed them very much! I can tell that English is not your first language, but I can also see the progress you are making with your writing. I love to read, and I really love supernatural fiction and romance, even with the language issues, I loved all of your books. Your characters and plots are well developed and engaging. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination with us all!"

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Another choice

"Awesome story. Although the grammar was a little hard to follow at times. Story line was great but you really need to have someone proofreading for you (something I hope you consider for future). Hope your next storyline is just as good 🥰🥰"

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@CamillaBarceilla Review

" Second Chance by Lily Leopold: I used to loved the Twilight series and I really wanted to reconnect with the fantasy era and I came across this romance novel. The book ponders the question of what happens when destiny gives you two soulmates and the soulmate your encouraged to pursue results in future obligations and responsibility. The book had some good twists and turns, although these could be hidden from the reader more. I loved the journey of the protagonists which was filled with regret, forgiveness and love. Although there are some grammatical mistakes, it is well written. I am looking forward to reading more from Lily and hopefully reading more about the secondary characters in the book. Definitely worth a read for a teenager, but as a young adult, I would definitely like to see more juicy sex scene to keep the blood flowing through the book. - Rates for Mates - Story: ⭑⭑⭑⭑ / ⭑⭑⭑⭑⭑ Smut: ⭑⭑ / ⭑⭑⭑⭑⭑ Love Cam xo PS: Please check my Instablog review on instagram @Camillabarceilla "

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MYSTERIOUS

"Nice story with so much drama on, i liked it. Thank you Author for the book. I really appreciate it. 💙💙💙"

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