Potential

"Has a chance at being a great Kamen Rider fanfiction but it has a lot of things that needs to be fixed. Firstly, the dialogue is confusing when there are dozens of characters speaking one after the other without any pause or identify who is speaking. Secondly, there's too much dialogue and not enough actions being addressed. Thirdly, it was confusing to follow at times because of how random some of the scenes were."