Very solid start!

"It is a very solid start to a story, with the right amount of expositional information and details in the surroundings. I also quite like how you turn a normal thing (fishing for food) in a much more interesting plotline (battling the crabs). However, if I may give you a tip: I saw some minor words being misspelled (be->me) where one letter had been replaced by another one. Maybe that's because you are a rapid typer, and if I didn't look for them, I wouldn't notice. So it is a minor detail. Also, a small thing: While you have a very good descriptive style, you didn't describe the physical appearance of the main character (Max), yet you did a very good job of describing his mental thoughts. Which is a good thing! All in all, a very solid start. Keep it up and have fun writing your next chapters!"