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unwanted

"Nice story. Spicy and funny."

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Great plot but too rushed

"Liked it, the ending was a bit rushed."

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"I liked the plot amd the outline of the story. Its funny witty. But i think it would be better to make it more concise. Greaf work. Good luck"

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review

"I liked the plot amd the outline of the story. Its funny witty. But i think it would be better to make it more concise. Greaf work. Good luck"

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Good short story

"It was a good short story. "

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Unwanted

"Love this but way to short "

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Obsessed

"I love this novel so far I can't put it down the characters are so awkwardly brilliant for each other it's playfully and fun, I love it ."

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Unwanted

"A delightful story that forced extremes of emotion from me! lol"

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Unwanted

"Enjoyable short story."

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Unwanted

"I really did enjoy this story from the beggining to the end. I must say i did not expect the happy ending. I did not expect Xane was ever gonna change. I am glad he changed because we all love happy endings. Again, I really enjoyed this one, it was very nice, short and Sweet. I am definately checking out all your other work, Author. Big ups. You are a talented writer. I look forward to more of your work. "

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Surprise

"So aside from some minor spelling g errors...this is fantastic! I had co templates reading it several times and honestly, I had passed it up for other stories everytime. Today I decided to give it a go and I am damn happy I did! I am also quite pleased to hear you have written another piece and will be starting it this evening :)"

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Lol well written

"This is a cute novel ...humor...excitement . It has it all !"

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Cute short story

"If you love a short story with a self aware woman gets everything she wants in a strange round about way…you’ll like this story! Lots of spelling errors but super easy to look past because the characters are well developed, the dialogue is natural and it’s over before you know it. "

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Unwanted

"I like it. Congratulations!"

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Short, But still a very good book!

"Good plot❤️🤞🏾"

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Dlm

"The story was good anyway. Sometimes short stories is a good way to relax a persons mind from a long drawn out one. This story kept to the plot without straying to non essential parts of the story."

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❤️

"Took him long enough "

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Great book

"I like the storyline and hopefully ends well! Can't wait!"

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Unwanted

"Very good short story. Interesting plot. I really enjoyed it the whole way through and will look for more from this writer."

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Unwanted

"Nice story "

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