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A claimed queen

"Liked the story very much"

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Claiming a queen

"Really awesome storyline; love the faith angle with romancr; great"

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Claiming A Queen

"This was a very good story 💗💗💗💗"

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Claiming a Queen

"I love this story!!!!"

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Submission

"This was submission on many levels. Submission to the will of God, to man and then to the truth. I saw in this a reversal of the children of Israel in Goshen against Egypt. This us truly a new take on erotica and I never thought it could be meshed with Christian values. Intriguing!"

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Mis

"The inspiration is sacrilegeous"

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Hey

":short but so much more "

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