Owning the love of my life
So deep and sad

"Really good handle on grief and it's affect on parenting "

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This story is so sweet.

"Very lovely story. "

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Macy14

20 chapters read

Love it!

"Love it!Nice story!"

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cackiesmith

21 chapters read

Owning the love of my life

"I absolutely, positively loved this story! I’m a sucker for happy endings!💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋"

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John

18 chapters read

Owning

"Love it. The story awesome "

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Good

"Good so far"

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Love

"Great book!"

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yusufbee

19 chapters read

Great work

"You are doing great "

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This is horrible

"Revise your work before posting it. The second sex scene between Damon and Claire wasn’t even Damon it was Nathan and honestly the whole plot of this story is lost and well dumb. Rewrite and actually take the time to fix your mistakes and let someone else revise your work before posting it as well "

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Megha

8 chapters read

Not complete

"Story is incomplete. No update shown. Where I read it . No description. "

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