Inkitt
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A writer with a dark side

"Based on the other stories that I've read by the author, I could tell that the story was out of the author's element. I think she was trying to write a thriller with as many gruesome details to accommodate it. Overall, the story was well written and quite expected."

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Sinister Saint

"The author's attempt at a dark gangster story is very disturbing and twisted. It was a bit repetitive with having Apollo stalking, assaulting and getting away with murder which is very unrealistic. Even if he is a "gangster", no criminal like that is above the law. Research is greatly needed and the darker assaulting scenes need to be toned down."

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Disgusting Ass Book

"This book is disgusting this dumb bitch of a author really wrote a rape scene this hoe or nigga make me sick this story deserves to be taken down immediately "

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