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Theo's Eclipse

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Summary

I was about an hour into my run when I smelt the most amazing smell ever of pine and peppermint.  *MINE* I came to a complete halt and before I could ask Tala what was happening I was tackled by this huge brown wolf.  I heard a loud growl that sent shivers down my spine but it didn’t scare me. I couldn’t really see but I could see about 5 other wolves standing around me and this other wolf on top of me.  Then the wolf on top of me got off and that's when I saw him the most beautiful man I have ever seen. All he was wearing was a pair of shorts, he looked like he was carved out of a mountain. He walked closer to me and I moved back a little. He crouched down and looked at me with so much emotion in his eyes.

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Introdution

Hi my name is Eclipse Bane. I just turned 18 and my foster home finally kicked me out. I have no clue who my parents are, I thought my whole life that I was this nobody that will never do anything until I turned 18.

*Flashback* I was out for my afternoon run it was about 5 so I took a shortcut -back to my foster home- through the woods. I was running through the woods it was already dark. When all of a sudden a sharp pain went through my body. I fall to my knees, as another wave of pain goes through me. I could feel my bones breaking and repositioning themselves. What felt like hours was just minutes, after about 4 minutes it was finally over and when I looked at me I was a white wolf with red highlights, and a symbol on my right shoulder. Then after that the last thing I remember was waking up in the woods naked. I finally found my way back to my foster home and thank goodness no one was up yet. I snuck up stairs to my room and put some clothes on then laid down in my bed and went to sleep. *End of Flashback*

After everything that happened last night I thought it was a good thing I was leaving. I had come to terms with myself being a werewolf. Plus my wolf was so nice her name is Tala. Now I am walking down the road with my suitcase with everything I own in it.

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I know this is short but it is not an actually chapter just an introduction.

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